tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7794237897304117309.post2559031282927871805..comments2023-06-02T04:17:09.193-04:00Comments on OLD MAN and the SYLLABLES: Poetry: Lady of the ShoreUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7794237897304117309.post-90391026437161957392011-09-30T15:54:34.286-04:002011-09-30T15:54:34.286-04:00Beautiful! You've created some very vivid pict...Beautiful! You've created some very vivid pictures there :)jayhttp://carefreewanderer.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7794237897304117309.post-83730002980238213372011-09-15T00:57:27.352-04:002011-09-15T00:57:27.352-04:00I like this one... well done! :-)I like this one... well done! :-)e.a.s. demershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16009167844130542312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7794237897304117309.post-2572301750242698342011-09-15T00:15:19.595-04:002011-09-15T00:15:19.595-04:00Beautiful poem. The colors in the photograph are s...Beautiful poem. The colors in the photograph are simply gorgeous. Well done!ShonEjaihttp://www.picture-speak.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7794237897304117309.post-33432433004165986782011-09-09T13:45:48.747-04:002011-09-09T13:45:48.747-04:00This is a very lovely and very visual poem!This is a very lovely and very visual poem!Short Poemshttp://marinelareka.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7794237897304117309.post-26966452519008906232011-09-08T11:20:59.644-04:002011-09-08T11:20:59.644-04:00Awesome, Larry! You nailed this one! beautiful tak...Awesome, Larry! You nailed this one! beautiful take on the prompt, visual and vivid writing! I really like this one!<br />Here's my entry for this slam prompt: http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2011/08/31/dearest-john-2/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7794237897304117309.post-63639720295992180962011-09-08T09:49:55.800-04:002011-09-08T09:49:55.800-04:00Great piece...love that last line! They are quite...Great piece...love that last line! They are quite alluring. :)Serena Shayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17959664736807639363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7794237897304117309.post-7720938942505344502011-09-07T19:14:05.281-04:002011-09-07T19:14:05.281-04:00fitting and stunning entry.
Thanks for sharing.fitting and stunning entry.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing.Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05532576755186051550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7794237897304117309.post-78265931157917700572011-09-07T17:20:16.988-04:002011-09-07T17:20:16.988-04:00Very vivid poem. Loved it.Very vivid poem. Loved it.Jack Edwards Poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11813177533690643652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7794237897304117309.post-83226321905796079942011-09-07T17:17:53.182-04:002011-09-07T17:17:53.182-04:00My mum used to say you can never trust your heart ...My mum used to say you can never trust your heart to a sailor. When I asked why she replied" Because they usually have a girl waiting in every port." Who knows but, yours is a romantic write.Daydreamertoohttp://daydreamertoo.comnoreply@blogger.com